Friday, 12 November 2010

Peer Feedback

Constructive feedback
  • Story didn't make sense.
  • Missing dialogue made it confusing.
  • Dropped map didn't work.
  • Didn't get a feel for the rest of the film.
Positive Feedback
  • Music worked well.
  • Could tell it was an opening to a film as it showed they were going to a place on an adventure.
  • Variety of different shots used.
  • Liked the over shoulder shot.
  • Liked the jump over the river.
  • Looked like zelda.
  • Liked the perspective shot/point of view shot.
  • Looked really professional. 
  • Continuity editing worked well in places.
  • Needed a lot of walking to show it was an adventure film/quest.
  • Titles looked professional/consistent.

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